My ENGLISH COMPETENCE in 2015

Breaking Bad Review 
Oral Presentation TDR

These two are the post that I am more proud.

The first one is about a review about a series called Breaking Bad which is a very well known for everybody who likes series.
I'm proud of it because I think that I did a very good synopsis, I mean that the structure is clear, the text shows personal opinions about the series and incentives you to what it.

The second one is my last oral presentation in this high school so that why I choose it, nevertheless I think that is in that presentation were I showed off all my speaking potential. It was almost everything improvised I think that I did it pretty well. I have to say that do this presentation was the easier  presentation in 2Bat, I almost didn't prepare anything because I already knew it from my TDR.

My ENGLISH PROGRESS from 2013-2015

1.1 Compare your first written document (email to teacher) and your last composition.

Comparing to my first written post ever (email to teacher) I can see huge different between my last post which is about reddit and the first one.
I remember myself when I rote the email to teacher I didn't know exactly what to write, I just said a lot of nonsense words actually. But by practising my English blogs I have improved a lot.
The structure of reddit's post is way better than the first one and this is because all the improvement that I have done during my blogs.

1.2 Compare your first oral presentation and your final oral presentation.

My first oral presentation was about the initiation ritual of Mafia. It was my first time ever I did a presentation with prezi and in English so I did many mistakes. I remember myself being so nervous about to speak in front the class that I had to memorize the entire text because I was really bad improvising and I didn't want my mind to go blank.
The last oral presentation was about my TDR, so I didn't had to memorize anything actually, I knew everything about my project so I improvised during the presentation (a thing that I have learned during Batxillerat) and I think that I did it pretty well. Of course I did mistakes but none of them were were that bad.

Formal Letter: Human Rights

Carmanço 40

Empuriabrava

17487

14th April 2015

Washington DC

White House

Disctrict of Columbia

Dear Mr.President,

I am a high school student and my name is Manel Ramirez.

 Let me begin by thanking you for reading this letter and all the effort that you did to make this country better I know that you are a busy person and I appreciate it.

Nevertheless, I am writing this letter to make you reflect about the current situation in the prison of Azkaban. As you know the prison was opened in 2002 and since that moment there have been an enormous amount of immoral actions such as torture and murder committed by employers of that prison.

The prisoners that go to Azkaban did not have a fair judgement so most of them are just suspects so they do not deserve that punishment.

Looking forward to your promote reply.

Manel Ramirez

Human Rights

Human Right #1: We Are All Born Free and Equal.

 I've chosen this topic because it is the most widely known Human Right. Even if you don't know what  a Human Right is.
This is the Human Right that I'm more in favor of. I think the all the humans should have the same opportunities, and you should be defined by your skill and talent reather than by your place or origin.
Unfortunately, as all the other rights it is not fullfilled with in every country. There are many countries from the South of Africa that they don't respect that right and a lot of citzen are suffering that.
Learned words: Equal = igual

Human Rights

1. What are human rights?
Human rights are the basic rights and freedoms that belong to every person in the world.
2. When and why were they created?
They were created as a result of the experience of the Second World War at 1948 to aboid another world conflict.
3. How many human rights are there?
There are 30 human right recognized for UN.
4. Which human right were you not familiar with?
Article 17: Everyone has the right to own property alone as well as in association with others.

Podcast

listen to ‘podcast’ on audioBoom

We are in JR bar in Castelló d’Empúries three fiends are having lunch.

Michael: So guys how do you find the sandwich?
Pol: Deem man, this is the best sandwich in the hood, isn’t it?
Jhonny: I don’t know mate, I think that the other nigga does it better.
Michael: well, today these sandwiches  we on the house. I have a big deal to give with you.
Jhomny: Dam men, what is the mate with the police.
Pol: how much dope were you casing when they canghr you.
Michael: No! No! The deal has nothing to do with the police
I don’t want to be a nigga anymore.
Jhonny: OMG, Are you f***k crazy? What have not aren’t you?
Pol: why do you want to be white trash?
Michael: If I wear white, my opportunity to get rich would be highest.
Pol: sur? Do you think that if you are with you will have more opportunities?
Michael: Absolut, for example few days ago, my last boss said that I bring a bad image to the corporation. And that’s pretty shitty.
Jhonny: But you didn’t so that other day an ad in in the bus sowed a black man how represent an enterprise.
Michael: yeah, but I don’t case, a part of that. I’m sure and nobody can change my mend.
Pol: but this operation is very complicated, and very expensive?
Michael: Yap but I have to dealing dope 3 or 2 months more and I have the money.

Opinion esay: Does humor play on important role in life?

It is well-known that happiness nowadays has been decreasig more and more and it seems that won't stop.

there are a lot of types of humour and different ways of having fun but all of them have one thing in common which is making people happier, and it's obious that happiness plays an important role for everyone. I can't really understand why someone wouldn't like humour, it is free, funny, helps to improve your relationships with people and even it's healthy for you.

In conclusion we need humour, it continues being part of our life to keep improving its the quality, because a life without humour doesn't deserve to be lived.

My opinion: Work fewer hours

Work less hours is what all people would like, but I think it has no sense. I will explain you some of my opinions about this topic.

Firstly, in our society and especially in Spain work less means have more freetime and waste it because we don't give it enough value. Nowadays maybe we have less freetime, but the freetime which  we have, we spend it doing things that we really enjoy or it relax us. It is like the holidays. In holidays we don't give the freetime the same value as the weekend.

Secondly if we work less this means that we will have a power salary and this not every body can afford it, because of the big credits which have the people because of buying disproportionately, thinking they will be more happier.

In conclusion if we work less we will have more freetime but won't give it the enough value and we will earn less salary a fact that not every body can afford.

Discussion on science limits

The medicine has improved a lo in the past years.
This makes the medicine and the sience more ambitious. With one hand we have the probolems which could produce the sience experiment are terrible. Some people are scared of these experiments. Because they aren't etical, and maybe don't respect the humans conditions.

With the other hand we have the benefits of science. The science experiments make the daily human life easier. Actually we have technology objects, every day for example we can have a hot shower or we be warm in winter.

I think the experiments on human life shouldn't have limits, because the experiments on human life are good to improve our life.

Where is the love - Black Eyed Peas

What's wrong with the world, mama                                 Què és el que passa al món, mama?           

People livin' like they ain't got no mamas                        la gent viu com si no tingués família

I think the whole world addicted to the drama                   crec que el món sencer està enganxat al drama

Only attracted to things that'll bring you trauma                només et sents atret per les coses traumàtiques

Overseas, yeah, we try to stop terrorism                          fora del nostre país, vam intentar combatre el terrorisme

But we still got terrorists here livin'                                  però encara tenim terroristes vivint aquí

In the USA, the big CIA                                                 a Estats Units, la gran cia,

The Bloods and The Crips and the KKK                            els Bloods, els cryps i el kkk.

But if you only have love for your own race                      però si només estimes les persones de la teva pròpia                                                                                        raça

Then you only leave space to discriminate                      llavors només deixes lloc a la discriminació

And to discriminate only generates hate                          i la discriminació genera odi

And when you hate then you're bound to get irate, yeah    i quan odies t'envaeix la indignació,

                                                                                  demostres maldat.

Madness is what you demonstrate                                  La bogeria és el que demostres

And that's exactly how anger works and operates             I així és exactament com funciona l'ira

Man, you gotta have love just to set it straight

Take control of your mind and meditate                          Pren el control de la teva ment i meditar

Let your soul gravitate to the love, y'all, y'all                   

People killin', people dyin'                                            Gent matant, gent morint

Children hurt and you hear them cryin'

Can you practise what you preach                                  Pots practicar el que predica

And would you turn the other cheek                               Y pondrás la otra mejilla

Father, Father, Father help us                                       Pare, Pare, Pare ens ajuden

Send some guidance from above                                  Enviar alguna orientació de dalt

'Cause people got me, got me questionin'                     Gent em té, m'ha preguntant

Where is the love (Love)                                              On és l'amor

Where is the love (The love)                                        On és l'amor

Where is the love (The love)                                        On és l'amor

Where is the love, the love, the love                             On és l'amor